new moon ...
an empty hollow
on your side of the bed


—Erin Noteboom
        

About the author: I've just published my first book, Ghost Maps: Poems for Carl Hruska, which won the CBC Canadian Literary Award and is currently short-listed for the League of Canadian Poets award for best book of poetry by a woman. I live, as you might guess, in Canada -- in Kitchener, Ontario. Haiku are an old passion for me.

I keep a daily weblog at www.vividpieces.net, and can be reached by e-mail at erin (at) vividpieces.net

Responses to the haiku for 11 January 2005 by Erin Noteboom

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO
    2005-01-11 04:02:18
     

    new moon
    lace dances
    in the wind

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-01-11 04:09:15
     

    winter dawns
    night lets go, with a sigh --
    that hollow feeling within

    -

  3.  
    Mixx
    2005-01-11 07:00:11
     

    new lovers embrace
    eclipsing the eclipsing
    silver moon above

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vaslemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2005-01-11 16:51:01
     

    The first quarrel...
    although if the honeymoon
    did even not end

  5.  
    Michael Moore
    2005-01-11 20:43:17
     

    So cold on the road
    I hear the snow whispering
    burn the love letters.

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-01-28 17:34:55
     

    wind's billowing
    displace white curtains
    aurora polaris arc

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