a snail
dallies under a leaf --
empty mailbox


—Laryalee Fraser

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

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Responses to the haiku for 1 February 2005 by Laryalee Fraser

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO (bagiruang at yahoo dot com)
    2005-02-01 03:47:35
     

    painful memories
    rubbing salt
    onto garden snail

  2.  
    Ed Schwellenbach
    2005-02-01 08:57:33
     

    snail mail
    empty
    mailbox

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-01 09:39:41
     

    lazy
    february day --
    postman drives by

    -

  4.  
    Mixx
    2005-02-01 14:27:56
     

    goo
    snail
    underfoot


    P.S.
    Perfect, Ed Schwellenbach's haiku.

  5.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2005-02-03 08:01:41
     

    letter from an old friend
    new leaves on the schefflera

  6.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-02-03 13:09:44
     

    underfoot-
    the postman
    hears a crunch

  7.  
    martin
    2005-02-17 23:27:41
     

    sunlight brightens the snow inside the mailbox

  8.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-22 22:12:01
     

    a sneeze
    through swollen eyelids--
    break in winter silence

  9.  
    aaron poller
    2009-07-21 11:10:49
     

    a mailbox snail
    dallies under
    empty leaf

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