rush hour
the ticket taker's
shaking hands

—Aurora Antonovic

About the author: Aurora Antonovic is a Canadian writer, editor, and visual artist whose work has appeared over one thousand times in publications spanning eleven countries and five continents. She is a recent winner in the 2005 Tanka Splendor Awards, and a Pushcart Prize nominee. She is a member of The Bohemian Poet, a collective poet/artist group headed by Michael Ladanyi.

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Responses to the haiku for 2 February 2005 by Aurora Antonovic

  1.  
    JOHN TIONG CHUNGHOO
    2005-02-02 05:09:51
     

    rush hour
    mother asks boy
    to hold tight to her skirt

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-02 05:19:14
     

    quiet time
    engulfing the darkness --
    wail of the sax

    -

  3.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-02-03 13:13:39
     

    waiting in traffic-
    the street
    turns to ice

  4.  
    Ellen G. Olinger (ElinGrace at wi dot rr dot com)
    2005-02-08 06:22:27
     

    "How long can I
    work like this?"
    ticket taker's fears

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