high tide
he casts his fishing line
into the darkness

—Margaret Hehman-Smith
        

About the author: Margaret Hehman-Smith, margaret at hehmansmith-artwork.com

The author is a member of the Southern California Haiku Study Group (socalhaiku@yahoogroups.com). Margaret's first haiku chapbook, "Dedicated to Abandoned Animals," is now available at American Haiku Archives, Cal State Library, 900 N Street, Sacramento, California. Her drawings in the book are of animals she rescued.

Responses to the haiku for 14 February 2005 by Margaret Hehman-Smith

  1.  
    kate
    2005-02-14 17:35:46
     

    low tide
    collecting shells
    before breakfast

  2.  
    Dudley de Souza (ddesouza8 at hotmail dot com)
    2005-02-14 20:06:22
     

    the glint
    of fish
    in sinuous
    depths

  3.  
    John Tiong Chung Hoo
    2005-02-15 01:53:33
     

    high tide
    shimmering moon
    in inching water

  4.  
    Mixx
    2005-02-15 08:15:03
     

    worn gifts from the sea
    woven shells and bits of glass
    lovely necklaces

  5.  
    shirley weese
    2005-02-15 10:42:59
     

    low tide
    crows
    turning over stones

  6.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-02-19 05:56:53
     

    morning, tide
    rising above the pilings --
    the pelican

  7.  
    Mixx
    2005-02-19 09:02:54
     

    changing tide
    scramblin 'bout the rocks
    seals

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-03-13 15:38:34
     

    shadow races --
    cross chilly grounds
    a silhouette soars on thermal winds

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