tinywords: haiku for 14 March 2005 by Patrick Sweeney

Lingering cold:
both hands surround
my battered tea mug

—Patrick Sweeney

About the author: Patrick Sweeney
Misawashi, Aomori-ken
Japan 033

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published 14 March 2005
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Responses to the haiku for 14 March 2005 by Patrick Sweeney

Kate

2005-03-14 09:42:10

against the wind-
he wears gloves
three times too big
Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)

2005-03-14 10:56:48

Suddenly a ring
all around the bedside lamp-
the vapours of tea
Lucette Tucker

2005-03-14 15:45:08

it's messy making
tea with leaves that float on top
i much prefer tea bags
john tiong chunghoo

2005-03-15 01:56:39

lingering cold
the breeze as i hang out
my tie to dry
bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2005-03-15 18:52:22

lingering thoughts ...

warm entanglement
her soft hand, my rough hand
H. Gene Murtha (Genemurt at cs dot com)

2005-03-17 16:10:11

Patrick,

I hope that the mug is ceramic: chips, cracks and
whatnots. Plastic doesn't work well with coffee
either, or even a jigger of whiskey; enjoyed.

Always,

Gene
bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2005-04-07 04:16:52

bone chilling breeze-
both hands
embrace the other
levon machenry

2005-05-21 19:39:46

here's as real a phenomena as it
was in dixie back in the day of
g-men and my grandaddy
best,
levon

early spring
the scent of lilac mingles
with the sour mash

old still
still
bubbling
Patrick sweeney

2006-03-17 04:06:59

awful haiku, obvious, and self centered.

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