spring cleaning 
bouncing from the pavement
steady rain

—David W. Wood
        

About the author: David Wood (x2x3x4 at msn dot com) David Wood, a retired gentlemen from Ohio, writes for his own enjoyment. He has had work shown by Paperwasp, Mainichi News, Stylus Poetry Journal, Heron's Nest, Simply Haiku, and the Asahi Haikuist Network.

 

Responses to the haiku for 17 March 2005 by David W. Wood

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-03-17 03:25:57
     

    buds abound:
    mid-day nap
    midway through cleaning list

  2.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-03-17 07:41:01
     

    washed away-
    yesterday's drawing
    becomes a puddle

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-03-17 07:59:53
     

    spring cleaning
    throwing things out
    becomes such a headache

  4.  
    Mixx
    2005-03-17 10:34:17
     

    naked spring cleaning
    (remember to keep shades down)
    dancin' to disco

  5.  
    ryoko
    2005-03-17 16:40:20
     

    spring budding
    farmers and mountains
    blessed rain

  6.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2005-03-18 20:23:22
     

    After the spring rain
    on the wet pavement
    trails of snails

  7.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-04-07 04:58:37
     

    layers of dust
    upon the window sill --
    cleansing cool rain

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