planter's moon
the milk white arc
of her nine month belly

—Ed Markowski

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 29 March 2005 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Beth (bethrankin at hotmail dot com)
    2005-03-29 05:48:08
     

    Bullied by the wind
    Pushing, tearing at my clothes
    Trying to intimidate.

  2.  
    Laura Orabone
    2005-03-29 09:16:16
     

    bathing, my milk lets down
    white ribbons unravel
    in water

  3.  
    Mixx
    2005-03-29 11:04:42
     

    moon tide
    upon full rising
    blood red

  4.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-03-29 12:59:57
     

    moonlit snack-
    "Are we out
    of ice cream again?

  5.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-03-29 19:14:14
     

    half submerged tire
    at water's edge --
    mallards greet the dawn

  6.  
    Bill Kenney
    2005-03-29 19:57:01
     

    up four flights
    how quickly she runs
    ninth month

  7.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-03-30 02:49:52
     

    arc of emptiness
    only sour sop skin remains
    after the birds came by

  8.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-04-08 13:20:26
     

    pale moon
    this spring morn --
    her smile lacklustre

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