new shower gel -
my thoughts
still dirty

—Robert Naczas
        

About the author: Robert Naczas (na_czas at poczta.onet.pl) was born and presently lives in South-East Poland. He published the collection "Breathless" in 1999 and his poems were featured in The Anthology of Polish Haiku (NOZOMI 2001).

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 April 2005 by Robert Naczas

  1.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-04-01 01:59:08
     

    daydreaming
    in the dandelions-
    a bubble bath

  2.  
    John Tiong ChungHoo (BAGIRUANG at YAHOO dot COM)
    2005-04-01 05:45:00
     

    april fool
    i wrote the best world haiku
    today

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2005-04-02 06:15:01
     

    morning showeró
    what will I wear
    this rainy day

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-04-02 12:33:06
     

    a new day -
    my heart
    still pains

  5.  
    Ed Schwellenbach
    2005-04-03 11:08:34
     

    swedish fish
    biting on gummi worms--
    blue jell-o pool

  6.  
    Mixx
    2005-04-04 10:23:45
     

    blue plastic pool
    never is as clean as now
    filled with emptiness

  7.  
    Ed Schwellenbach
    2005-04-04 11:44:15
     

    blue jell-o pool--
    a five-fingered monster
    stalks the swedish fish


    Really great haiku, Kate

  8.  
    EH
    2005-04-13 07:04:19
     

    time for a new haiku - I feel like I need a shower after looking at this same one every day for weeks?

  9.  
    Mixx
    2005-04-13 15:21:12
     

    pass the soap
    or rather
    squeeze me some jel

  10.  
    shirley weese (sweese at telus dot net)
    2005-04-13 20:34:44
     

    gardening all day
    covered in topsoil
    turn on the shower!!

  11.  
    jami
    2005-04-18 16:09:32
     

    a sea of blankets
    outside the snow is sticking
    we drift back asleep

  12.  
    ed markowski
    2005-04-19 09:46:28
     

    fifty first birthday
    i think of all the women
    i'll never sleep with

  13.  
    Mixx
    2005-04-29 17:52:46
     

    Hey there Mister Ed
    life is long and with some luck
    you'll still get to _ _ _ _*


    *play


    Hope it was Happy

  14.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-01 17:21:33
     

    prating chilling rain...
    yet all my thoughts
    suddenly hushed

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