summer gusts
the outdoor furniture
rearranged

—Margaret Hehman-Smith
        

Originally published in the Yuki Teikei Haiku Society Anthology 2002

About the author: Margaret Hehman-Smith, margaret at hehmansmith-artwork.com

The author is a member of the Southern California Haiku Study Group (socalhaiku@yahoogroups.com). Margaret's first haiku chapbook, "Dedicated to Abandoned Animals," is now available at American Haiku Archives, Cal State Library, 900 N Street, Sacramento, California. Her drawings in the book are of animals she rescued.

Responses to the haiku for 17 May 2005 by Margaret Hehman-Smith

  1.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-05-17 14:06:17
     

    tangled
    in the wind,
    a lost balloon

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-05-17 14:49:28
     

    darkness
    through the branches of the black cherry tree
    call of the blue jay

  3.  
    bret wooldridge
    2005-05-17 16:30:28
     

    dark brown afternoon-
    a sudden gust topples
    a patio chair

    thx for brightening my inbox!

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2005-05-18 03:52:44
     

    Beating the drum...
    the summer rain drop by drop
    over the outdoor furniture

  5.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-05-20 07:30:13
     

    summer wind
    the grass the same style
    as my hair

  6.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-07 21:00:49
     

    march winds--
    green mangoes fall to earth
    too soon

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