low tide
the smell of seaweed
and her Chanel No. 5

—Sue Mill
        

About the author: Sue Mill, suemill at hotmail dot com
Brisbane, Australia

I have been writing haiku for about six years. I belong to one haiku group here in Brisbane and am involved with the newly-formed Australian Haiku Society (HaikuOz for short) as Publications Officer. Here is the HaikuOz Web site.

 

Responses to the haiku for 26 May 2005 by Sue Mill

  1.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-05-26 00:47:47
     

    lower than usual
    sunset ...
    her head upon my shoulder, rest

  2.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-05-26 09:50:50
     

    low tide
    hand in hand
    we walk to the next island

  3.  
    kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-05-26 10:03:26
     

    even at the beach,
    a whiff of grandmother's
    hair spray

  4.  
    Mixx
    2005-05-26 11:44:30
     

    her favorite sweater
    stored years in my cedar chest
    faint #5



    And from daughter to grand-daughter, we all still wear Chanel...another pleasant retrospection, thanks Sue

  5.  
    2005-05-26 13:42:49
     

    Pungnet!

  6.  
    levon machenry
    2005-05-26 17:05:04
     

    another snapshot from dixie. ain't nothing
    as good as a pulled pork sandwhich, with a side
    a slaw, and some good fresh sweetcorn. now
    when i say bar-b-que i mean slow smoked,
    at least a 12 hour job.


    dawn
    me an' sally jones
    git to smoking

  7.  
    R.K.Singh (profrksingh at yahoo dot com)
    2005-05-26 22:13:11
     

    Still fresh
    in the hanky's fold--
    jasmine

  8.  
    2005-05-28 05:35:32
     

    geluid van fluiten
    in de avond
    louter zeewier op de kust

    Dutch translation of Helen Waddell, Abelard

  9.  
    martin
    2005-06-04 18:23:39
     

    summer night
    the smell of seaweed
    in the sand

  10.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-09 20:58:18
     

    miami full moon
    with dinner overlooking the bay
    ...bedding fish

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