red grapes...
the many hands it took
to bring them to this table

—Ed Markowski

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 27 May 2005 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    michel
    2005-05-27 12:05:48
     

    i really like your haiku. my mind was on less poetic thoughts this morning,
    but i thought perhaps the many hands and many faces tied in..

    nervously i watch
    so many focused faces
    the angiogram

  2.  
    levon machenry
    2005-05-27 18:18:27
     

    well now let's go to that souther bastion
    of good taste, the waffle house...


    peach pie
    the tone and color
    of miss sally's cheeks

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-05-27 20:08:44
     

    red grapes
    carlifornian wonder
    borneo table

  4.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-05-27 21:43:05
     

    heavy on the vine --
    the lips, dew drops form
    biting into a cluster

  5.  
    martin
    2005-06-04 18:20:31
     

    noon vineyard
    ants glisten on the squashed grape

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