ragged leaf
the yellow grasshopper's
missing leg

—Sue Mill

About the author: Sue Mill, suemill at hotmail dot com
Brisbane, Australia

I have been writing haiku for about six years. I belong to one haiku group here in Brisbane and am involved with the newly-formed Australian Haiku Society (HaikuOz for short) as Publications Officer. Here is the HaikuOz Web site.

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Responses to the haiku for 14 June 2005 by Sue Mill

  1.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2005-06-14 13:15:40
     

    torn petals
    his apology added
    to the compost

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-06-15 10:03:31
     

    wow, kate, i can feel the passion

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    tuft of feather
    cross my brow --
    the mockingbird's song

  3.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-06-18 08:51:54
     

    grasshopper
    on leaves
    his stare gives him away

  4.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-22 15:49:55
     

    broken blue bottle
    lives a second life--
    white hopscotch line

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