summer downpour --
next door
the kids keep playing

—Bill Waters
        

About the author: Bill Waters
Titusville, NJ
bnwaters at verizon.net

 

Responses to the haiku for 23 June 2005 by Bill Waters

  1.  
    oc holiday
    2005-06-23 12:23:10
     

    rain delay
    two gulls pace the tarp
    between third and home


    nice haiku mr. waters, thanks,
    oc

  2.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2005-06-29 21:20:15
     

    another summer shower
    awakening
    has made me older

  3.  
    EH
    2005-07-11 08:14:39
     

    wonderful! thank you!
    a sensory delight!

  4.  
    levon machenry
    2005-07-12 14:48:06
     

    hurricane warning
    the kids begin a new game
    of pick up sticks

  5.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2006-04-02 10:44:12
     

    A flash of lightning-
    shadows flickering
    on the wall

  6.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-27 17:06:52
     

    wavering curtains-
    darkness descends
    as my weekend begins

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