lost
in a field of sunflowers
the sun

—Ed Markowski
        

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

 

Responses to the haiku for 8 July 2005 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2005-07-08 07:20:26
     

    simply beautiful. . .
    -kala

  2.  
    Mixx
    2005-07-08 11:14:59
     

    back in Tuscany
    lost among the sunflowers
    thank you Mr. Ed

  3.  
    kate
    2005-07-08 11:42:14
     

    lost in thought
    a breeze of maple leaves

  4.  
    JJ
    2005-07-08 14:38:49
     

    lost
    in a sea
    of sunflowers

  5.  
    Margarita Engle
    2005-07-08 15:46:47
     

    Dear Ed Markowski, Thanks for this haiku. It offers a beautiful visual effect. I love the dual image of a person lost in a sunflower field, and/or, the sun lost from view amidst so many sunflowers.

    in deep shade
    a roadside vendor offers
    sunflowers

  6.  
    Vasile Moldovan
    2005-07-09 03:31:07
     

    Face to face:
    the twin sisters and
    her Big Brother

  7.  
    2005-07-09 12:54:09
     

    Beautiful haiku Ed.
    ~
    sunrise
    a field of sunflowers
    look East

  8.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-07-09 22:50:12
     

    lost
    in the crowd
    his girlfriend

  9.  
    bobby michael richardson
    2005-07-10 08:06:47
     

    crisp dawn
    through the pines ~
    stealthily spreading

  10.  
    2005-07-11 03:33:17
     

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  11.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-03-29 18:41:24
     

    found copper pennies
    'long my path
    beneath silver-lined clouds

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