nude beach
  a man and a woman
    collect shells


—Ed Markowski

Originally published in The Heron's Nest."

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 13 October 2005 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2005-10-13 09:54:36
     

    darkness envelops:
    sky and beach lamps
    light up!

    -kala

  2.  
    yooper nils
    2005-10-13 12:43:23
     

    and a short time later...

    nude beach
    a woman pulls
    an apple from the cooler

  3.  
    Collin Barber
    2005-10-13 13:43:49
     

    hey ed,

    I couldn't help but notice the modification. Nice.

  4.  
    Collin Barber
    2005-10-13 16:45:27
     

    nude beach
    not wearing any
    sunscreen

  5.  
    sylvain moret
    2005-10-13 17:07:25
     

    nude beach
    the new woman's
    tan lines

  6.  
    Collin Barber
    2005-10-13 17:26:42
     

    maintaining
    eye contact
    nude beach

  7.  
    JJ
    2005-10-13 18:12:27
     

    nude beach--
    bumping in to
    Miss Boobs 1970

  8.  
    levon machenry
    2005-10-13 19:28:53
     

    nude beach
    everybody
    wears sunglasses

  9.  
    bobby michael richardson
    2005-10-13 23:07:42
     

    deserted beach
    alone with my thoughts--
    except for the rain

  10.  
    Dalip Daswani
    2005-10-14 02:48:00
     

    beach denuded
    as man and woman
    collect themselves

  11.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-10-17 03:08:22
     

    nude beach
    the couple clothed by
    untanned parts

  12.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-05-09 12:51:31
     

    stretching towards the morning sun--
    bead of water
    trickles down my chin

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