luffing of wings --
two low-flying geese
riffle the lake

—Richard Stevenson
        

About the author: Richard Stevenson lives and teaches in Lethbridge in southern Alberta, Canada. He is the author of twenty books, including, most recently, Live Evil: A Homage To Miles Davis (2000), Hot Flashes: Maiduguri Haiku, Senryu, and Tanka (2001), and Parrot With Tourette's (2004).

Responses to the haiku for 18 November 2005 by Richard Stevenson

  1.  
    A Schmidt
    2005-11-18 13:24:33
     

    What an image! Beyand the visual, the repetition of the l's and f's creates an auditory image. Well done!

  2.  
    Judith Ingram
    2005-11-18 14:12:27
     

    Flaming underbellies
    vee south
    of the sunset

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan
    2005-11-18 16:23:25
     

    Behind the two geese
    a lost feather flutters...
    Goose's? Gander's?

  4.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2005-11-19 22:29:29
     

    two geese at lake
    one a realist work
    the other a van gogh

  5.  
    bobby michael richardson
    2005-11-20 17:08:39
     

    crinkly dried leaf
    borne far, on evening crisp breeze--
    bay of the hound

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