Floating in the space
Between floor and ceiling
Yesterday's balloon

—Kristine Metzker
        

About the author: Kristine Metzker (metzker at dsa-plan.com).

 

Responses to the haiku for 24 April 2006 by Kristine Metzker

  1.  
    2006-04-24 09:05:09
     

    very interesting!

    for me a philosophy about time (today, yesterday, what was, what is...)


    best regards,
    Angelika

  2.  
    Kala Ramesh
    2006-04-24 16:57:25
     

    Beautiful Kristine.
    Well done!

    -kala

  3.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2006-04-25 01:29:36
     

    Open window-
    the day before yesterday's ballon
    in a branch of plum

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-04-25 21:08:37
     

    yesterday's white blooms
    strewn cross the hillside--
    multicolored hot air balloons

  5.  
    kristine metzker
    2007-03-13 09:44:15
     

    this is a great Haiku but i did not write it. that was not my email address in 2006. this is very odd!

  6.  
    syllableº17
    2009-04-02 20:24:16
     

    Snakes and ladders day,

    squashed in the kids tree-house,

    watching April rain.

    — sº17, 2009

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-05-15 16:03:56
     

    noon moon--
    beneath the pines
    sparrow with a broken wing

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