robins watching me --
watching the cat watching me
watching the robins

—J. D. Nelson
        

About the author: J. D. Nelson's poems have appeared in many small press publications. He lives in Colorado. Visit his website for more information: www.MadVerse.com.

 

Responses to the haiku for 4 May 2006 by J. D. Nelson

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-05-04 06:09:11
     

    crisp may day
    out on the proverbial limb--
    half a pale-white egg shell

  2.  
    Georgia
    2006-05-04 13:13:35
     

    Fascinating haiku, very nice indeed.

  3.  
    Kujitm
    2006-05-04 14:49:45
     

    oh, spring!
    the trees are growing its fruits
    the girls undressing their thights,,,

    Kujtim

  4.  
    wd melton
    2006-05-04 15:43:49
     

    home from iraq
    my son's right arm
    left behind


    STAND UP AGAINST THE WAR!

  5.  
    lindsay coker
    2006-05-04 16:12:57
     

    Very nice image producing an appreciative smile

  6.  
    sylvain moret
    2006-05-04 16:44:50
     

    kujitm,
    always an absolute pleasure to read
    your comments. what is albania's national
    dish? the albanian restaurants here serve
    alot of greek food. well it all comes down
    to this...


    cheese ablaze
    the albanian cook shouts
    OPA!

  7.  
    Kala Ramesh
    2006-05-04 18:54:53
     

    I give up!!
    I tried my level best to figure out who was watching whom !!!
    Please Nelson - give me the answer before I go insane!
    -kala

  8.  
    2006-05-07 07:18:09
     

    robins watching me --
    watching the cat watching me
    watching the robins

    óJ. D. Nelson

    I'm still not sure if I like this poem but it seems to be growing on me though! (-;

    This won't help you, Kala Ramesh, but one from me:

    in the river reflection
    he watches himself
    watch the sunset

    J.D.'s poem is certainly worth reading all over again, but a word of caution, watch it! (-;

  9.  
    Kala Ramesh
    2006-05-07 10:46:23
     

    Thanks a ton, Alan.

    You said - Watch it!!!
    I am sort of getting it now?!
    -kala

  10.  
    tjipoetatquill
    2006-05-21 19:44:17
     

    this work is one of the best pieces i have ever read! thank you!

  11.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-06-03 15:05:28
     

    the aged dancer, yet
    this spring of 2009--
    even in bed

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