the mountain top dimples under the strider's leg

—Martin Gottlieb Cohen

Previously published in published in Contemporary Haibun Online

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

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Responses to the haiku for 9 May 2006 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-05-09 01:03:57
     

    very interesting!

  2.  
    Darleen Inman (superscor069 at yahoo dot com)
    2006-05-09 07:14:24
     

    Beautiful Martin I really liked this.To me this is a wonderful haiku.5/7/5 of nature, and I could visualize it.I try to write one everyday myself.Thank you for sharing.Your Friend in poetry, Darleen Inman {Time}

  3.  
    Magyar
    2006-05-09 09:37:06
     

    left behind
    where we trod
    signatures of being

    You've proded imagination Martin... isn't that what this is all about_?

  4.  
    Kujtim
    2006-05-09 14:48:14
     

    the crazy rain
    the gusty runlets
    are depressing the field

    Kujtim

  5.  
    b. m. richardson
    2006-05-09 16:43:53
     

    darleen, magyar, if only this was what it's all about. some equate "it" to zen, an enlightenment, self-discipline, innate intuition, or perchance scripture. low(lo) and behold, some would say all i've said is one and the same
    i beg to differ, but i drift.
    ask yourselves what it's all about; is 5-7-5 conceivably a happenstance...

    spring day-
    a summer shower cleanse my thoughts

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