A silver raindrop
quivers on a leaf tip --
receding thunder.

—James Ricklef

About the author: James's Haiku development has been helped greatly by his involvement in the Southern California Haiku Study Group. You can see his tiny corner of the Haiku world at http://www.jamesricklef.com/Haiku.html.

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Responses to the haiku for 12 May 2006 by James Ricklef

  1.  
    b. m. richardson
    2006-05-12 02:25:40
     

    cooling raindrop
    'gainst my brow--
    not a cloud in the sky

  2.  
    Kujtim
    2006-05-12 14:30:28
     

    on wood's peaks
    the moon,
    the candle blaze...

  3.  
    Magyar
    2006-05-13 08:11:21
     

    morning mist gemmed
    the survival snare
    a night spider's art

  4.  
    river malcolm
    2006-05-13 21:02:48
     

    sky thundering
    sisters huddling by boulder
    hold each other's hand

  5.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-06-03 15:30:54
     

    yes, hands tell all...

    -

    father's massive rough hand
    holding tiny hand--
    letting go blue balloon

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