Spring
under the palm tree
broken eggshells

—Dawn Bruce

About the author: Dawn Bruce, somersetpoets at ozemail.com.au

Dawn Bruce is a widely published Australian poet, winner of numerous free verse and haiku awards. Dawn was the coordinator of Somerset Poets for five years and is now leader of two creative writing groups in Sydney. Her second book, 'Tangible Shadows', will be published late 2005.

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Responses to the haiku for 24 May 2006 by Dawn Bruce

  1.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2006-05-24 03:44:12
     

    Over the lone tree
    a bird and its nestling-
    first lesson of volation

  2.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-05-26 18:27:58
     

    midnight passing
    the spot where you used to be--
    'cuse me while i kiss the stars

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-05-27 16:24:16
     

    Santa Monica
    under the palm trees
    broken people

    Sorry about that. Great ku, Dawn.

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