spring night --
her moonlit zipper curves
from throat to waist



—Harold Bowes
        

Previously published in the September 2005 issue of Heronís Nest.

About the author: Harold Bowes has been published in several haiku journals, both electronic and paper, and has appeared in the Red Moon Anthology. He edits Alba, an ezine emphasizing short poetry.

Write to him at heb at oregontrail.net.

 

Responses to the haiku for 2 June 2006 by Harold Bowes

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-06-02 09:06:03
     

    An erotic and evocative ku, Harold.

    unbuttoning her blouse
    but his fingers
    are trembling

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-06-02 12:19:34
     

    oh, these nights in spring...


    well done!

  3.  
    Marge Simon
    2006-06-03 07:00:21
     

    Stunning image! I could do it in a piece of art, but not as artfully as these three lines conjure.

  4.  
    Duane Ackerson (Ackerson at navicom dot com)
    2006-06-04 18:15:17
     

    A fine poem. I like the suggestion of the moon as both the revealing agent and the thing revealed.

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-06-06 20:33:07
     

    beneath full moon's
    golden peaks and valleys--
    caressing hands

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