a bus ride
the wind sitting next to me
an old friend

—Sukasah Syahdan
        

About the author: Sukasah Syahdan is one of the few Indonesian poets writing in English. Some of his works can be found in his poetry weblog, The Tjipoetat Quill. He can be reached at tjipoetatquill AT hotpop DOT com.

Responses to the haiku for 9 June 2006 by Sukasah Syahdan

  1.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-06-09 13:01:21
     

    i enjoyed to read this ku

  2.  
    2006-06-09 14:50:53
     

    a bus ride
    the coin falling like a bell
    my old friends

    Why? Because there's sound and sensation and a final sense of coming *into*.

    "-"

  3.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-06-10 10:28:03
     

    midnight, such bitter wicked darkness-
    in the arms of an old friend

  4.  
    Georgia
    2006-06-12 13:09:20
     

    Imaginative, mysterious, haunting.
    Somehow comforting.

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