front row seats
a spot of white
on Othello's face
 

—Dave Bacharach
        

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Responses to the haiku for 19 June 2006 by Dave Bacharach

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-06-19 09:33:29
     

    Good one, Dave.

    conversation
    with an actor
    about him

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-06-19 09:58:39
     

    that`s interesting!

    this poem has a strong message -- important is from which place (from which position, point of view) we have a look

  3.  
    Lynne
    2006-06-19 11:15:37
     

    Lovely surprise to see this in my Inbox!

  4.  
    Dru Philippou
    2006-06-19 11:33:54
     

    that spot . . . such a sense of vulnerability.

  5.  
    2006-06-19 12:02:39
     

    this is a really great haiku, dave.

  6.  
    Georgia
    2006-06-19 14:54:23
     

    Othello
    in blackface --
    layers of history

  7.  
    laryalee
    2006-06-19 18:29:20
     

    Way to go, Dave!
    Touch of humor, layers
    of meaning...
    ;-)

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-06-22 04:07:53
     

    hmmm
    that spot, does it express or relate to all things that are not what one think they really are...

    ---

    at dawn
    the mockingbird never sings
    from the top of the pine

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