AA meeting - 
he lipsynchs
the first hour

—Nardin Gottfried
        

 

Responses to the haiku for 27 June 2006 by Nardin Gottfried

  1.  
    2006-06-13 12:53:13
     

    Good solid "urban haiku". Sparse and economic.

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-06-27 09:30:26
     

    Good one, nardin.

    AA meeting
    each surprised to see
    the other

    AA meeting
    the welcoming hand
    trembles

    AA meeting
    a pigeon at the window
    keeps coming back

  3.  
    Laura
    2006-06-27 11:35:15
     

    Really excellent! I don't see enough haiku addressing addiction or other personal issues.

  4.  
    Judith Ingram
    2006-06-27 22:06:33
     

    Laura . . . I agree with you. In this day and age, haiku could address so many personal issues and while I think that is what we want and should do, the other part of me wonders if that is the way to go. It's a sure bet that whereever it goes, you and I will probably have nothing to do with it.

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-06-29 13:16:31
     

    lovers quarrel
    for the last hour
    only silence is heard

  6.  
    2006-07-16 21:22:07
     

    Excellent, Bill! You really captured it!

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-07-01 17:24:37
     

    through partially closed blinds
    his loneliness this spring dawn--
    the runner

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