hearing for the first time
the whisper
of snake belly on bark

—Ynes Sanz
        

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Responses to the haiku for 28 June 2006 by Ynes Sanz

  1.  
    Frances Ruth Harris
    2006-06-28 11:39:34
     

    Fantistic! I will be feeling this over and
    over for years to come! Thank you!

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-06-28 16:20:53
     

    A memorable moment, ynes.

  3.  
    Laryalee
    2006-06-28 16:30:04
     

    An amazing moment...well done!

  4.  
    Kala Ramesh
    2006-06-28 19:00:58
     

    Very sensitive. . .
    i'll remember this haiku for a long time, Ynes

    - kala

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-06-29 13:25:04
     

    seeing intelligence-
    staring back
    the coachwhip eyes

  6.  
    Ynes
    2006-06-29 18:38:59
     

    thanks so much for making a newchum feel part of the worldwide haiku community ... meanwhile back in beautiful brisbane australia .....

    bromeliads
    a fingerling snake
    weaving songlines

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-07-01 17:39:21
     

    encompassing flickering twilight
    silent meal--
    snake whisper

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