traffic light:
the leaves stopped
at the border

—Jordi Climent
        

The original Spanish version of this haiku took second place in the first kukai of Asfalto Mojado, the hispanic web of urban haiku.

cambia el semáforo
se detienen las hojas
junto al arcén

About the author: Jordi Climent, jclimentb at gmail dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 4 July 2006 by Jordi Climent

  1.  
    2006-07-04 09:20:43
     

    Hola amigo Jordi,
    Qué grata sorpresa leerte por estos rumbos.
    Tu haiku me parece excelente.

    Hi Jordi,
    Nice surprise see you here.
    A urban ku excellent.

    Saludos desde México DF...

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan
    2006-07-04 09:48:03
     

    Muffled cracklings
    under the spiked boots-
    hurried pedestrians

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-07-04 11:38:21
     

    gated community
    leaves drift by
    the guard post

  4.  
    kujtim
    2006-07-04 13:32:04
     

    unhappy nests bellow the balcony
    awallows came
    and went without address

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-07-04 17:30:19
     

    fading sunset:
    long blades of brown grass bow
    towards the horizon

  6.  
    il.balan
    2006-07-05 11:41:42
     

    Hola amigo Jordi,
    Me da gusto leerte por estos rumbos.
    Tu haiku es excelente.

    Hi Jordi,
    Nice to see you here.
    A urban ku excellent.

    Saludos desde México

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-07-14 14:55:18
     

    interstate rest stop--
    travelers welcome
    wi-fi connection

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