down elevator --
ahh --
twenty-seven seconds of nobody!


—Tom Frenkel
        

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Responses to the haiku for 6 July 2006 by Tom Frenkel

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-07-06 04:05:59
     

    eyes close
    savouring her perfume--
    how many more floors to go

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-07-06 06:33:21
     

    drifting up
    from the down escalator
    the scent of a woman

    Good one, Tom

  3.  
    Kala Ramesh
    2006-07-06 08:58:39
     

    Beautiful one!

    Kala

  4.  
    pearl
    2006-07-06 18:39:19
     

    refreshing. different. a stick of
    wintergreen. in a pack of cigarettes.
    one cuban cigar. amongst the rg dunns.
    bright sunlight.

  5.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-07-16 16:42:57
     

    room's silence
    great-aunt's passing
    99 years of memories

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