from the shade
of the spreading old elm
street light glow

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia's weblog contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at maryschild44 at yahoo dot com.

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Responses to the haiku for 12 July 2006 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-07-12 06:08:38
     

    beneath the greying dawn-
    the black duck's head
    beneath the darker water

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-07-12 07:46:20
     

    dead tree
    the full moon
    in its branches

  3.  
    Sue Burke
    2006-07-14 05:41:23
     

    dangling strands
    from the songbird's nest --
    cassette tape

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-09-05 04:48:29
     

    thanks sue, the aroma of freshly brewed coffee, while listening to the morning rain, again reading patricia's previous haiku(s), i spotted yours.


    heavy metal tape...
    wavering from the songbird's nest
    sweet music

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