from the shade
of the spreading old elm
street light glow

—Patricia Kelly
        

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.

 

Responses to the haiku for 12 July 2006 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-07-12 06:08:38
     

    beneath the greying dawn-
    the black duck's head
    beneath the darker water

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-07-12 07:46:20
     

    dead tree
    the full moon
    in its branches

  3.  
    2006-07-14 05:41:23
     

    dangling strands
    from the songbird's nest --
    cassette tape

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-09-05 04:48:29
     

    thanks sue, the aroma of freshly brewed coffee, while listening to the morning rain, again reading patricia's previous haiku(s), i spotted yours.


    heavy metal tape...
    wavering from the songbird's nest
    sweet music

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