ripe moon -
my pale hands
in the berry bushes


—Elena Naskova

About the author: I was born and raised in Macedonia. I now live in Seattle and I love the trees and the rain. I write mostly haiku and plays.

Contact: samoil99 at earthlink dot net

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Responses to the haiku for 13 July 2006 by Elena Naskova

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-07-13 05:39:10
     

    elena, kudos.
    this haiku, one of few, grabs my imagination, innuendoes of a romantic sort(to me); causing me to remember (when), and even promises of things to come.

    elena, however, that's my imagination at play; albeit, i, too, remember foraging (neighbors') orchards and vineyards...

    -

    night winds, rising-
    her words
    match the crescendo

  2.  
    Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
    2006-07-13 13:10:57
     

    In the summer moonlight
    the bloody fingers
    of a fair lady

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