still life:
the pear's
pitted skin
—Helen Buckingham
About the author: Born in London, 1960. Now lives in Bristol in the south-west of England. Her haiku have appeared in Acorn, Frogpond, Mainichi Daily News, Mayfly, Modern Haiku, Roadrunner, Snapshots and The Heron's Nest among others, and last year featured in A New Resonance 5: Emerging Voices in English-Language Haiku (Red Moon Press). Her work has been placed in a number of competitions including, most recently: The Basho Festival Award and The Snapshot Press Calendar Competition.
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Dear Helen -
a truly wonderful haiku.
Best wishes - Lynne
I enjoyed this haiku! I loved the pun on 'still life' - the painterly and the fact the pear is still alive. Pears are often associated with women, so I couldn't help seeing this as a metaphor of aging. We don't like how our skin gets old, but your haiku shows there is still plenty to celebrate. Thank you.
I agree with Lynne & Sue too, and by the way Helen is also a runner up in the With Words @ Oppo} haiku competition!
I'll be making an exhibition of the contest entries, for the Bristol Poetry Festival, which will replace the current Haiku Post-It Exhibition.
There are a lot of haiku events happening in Bristol from this week-end and into September. Details on Area 17 & Haiku Bulletin News.
Very nice haiku, Helen. I love its painterly quality.
painted turtle
asleep in his house --
still life
off-white statuesque stork
staring past willowy reeds--
i move, first