thunder
  the farmers at the credit union
                              applaud

—Ed Markowski
        

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

 

Responses to the haiku for 9 August 2006 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    gK
    2006-07-29 22:30:39
     

    This one I really, really liked. The wording, and even the formatting, were very effective.

  2.  
    Andrea Cecon (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2006-08-09 08:00:01
     

    Ed,
    will be the thunder or will be the applauses, but there's something in this ku of really effective and powerfull... great work.

  3.  
    Magyar
    2006-08-09 08:41:14
     

    Ed, I hope you'll not be insulted by my use of your fine thought... in my contrary (hopeful result) response. Tnx, M

    thunder claps
    rains credit
    farmers to harvest

  4.  
    Vasile Moldovan
    2006-08-09 10:24:12
     

    Round of applauses-
    a deaf person
    claps one's hands too

  5.  
    judith Ingram
    2006-08-09 12:17:01
     

    Ed, I applaud you ! (no pun intended)
    A super poem! Judith

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-08-13 02:34:04
     

    sleepless night
    with the dawn--
    later than usual

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