straight falling rain
she tells him
it is over

—Marilyn Appl Walker

This haiku was first published by Acorn.

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Responses to the haiku for 1 September 2006 by Marilyn Appl Walker

  1.  
    Corneliu Atanasiu
    2006-09-01 00:16:09
     

    the rain is over
    he’s leaving
    without words

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-09-01 08:32:35
     

    breakup—
    my second best pajamas
    still at her place

  3.  
    mike farley
    2006-09-01 10:00:38
     

    I'm going
    you're staying
    two autumns for us

    Buson

  4.  
    Karen Briggs
    2006-09-01 12:35:55
     

    straight falling rain
    she gives him
    the boot

  5.  
    Judith Ingram
    2006-09-01 19:44:31
     

    Bill Kenney, thank goodness they were your 2nd best !
    Great humor.

    Straight falling rain
    she sends him away
    still in love with him

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-09-01 19:53:12
     

    sheets of rain
    blanket dimly lit corner--
    this statuesque silhouette

  7.  
    Rob Duvall
    2006-09-01 21:59:15
     

    Straight falling rain
    choking back the hot tears
    they go separate ways

  8.  
    sb
    2006-09-01 23:43:20
     

    rain dries on my cheek
    moving on already
    the sky is still crying

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