the tilt of your head
as you stare out the window
distant lightning

—Patricia Kelly
        

About the author: Patricia has a weblog that contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at roswila at gmail dot com.

Responses to the haiku for 5 September 2006 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-09-05 04:14:32
     

    steady prattle
    of morning rain--
    simmering sun

  2.  
    sb
    2006-09-05 10:23:58
     

    your heartbeat
    between exhalations
    thunder afar

  3.  
    Frances Ruth Harris
    2006-09-05 16:07:05
     

    So clear and clean and fresh~!

    Thank you

  4.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-09-28 16:44:22
     

    autumn rains--
    your missing warmth
    awakening me

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