garden statue 
of Peter Pan...
lichen-grey

—Dawn Bruce
        

About the author: Dawn Bruce, somersetpoets at ozemail.com.au

Dawn Bruce is a widely published Australian poet, winner of numerous free verse and haiku awards. Dawn was the coordinator of Somerset Poets for five years and is now leader of two creative writing groups in Sydney. Her second book, 'Tangible Shadows', will be published late 2005.

Responses to the haiku for 27 September 2006 by Dawn Bruce

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-09-27 12:24:34
     

    Haiku with bite and allusion! ;-)

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-09-27 12:46:47
     

    "...Peter Pan: a story told to kids, a story remembered by adults for the rest of their lives..." A true sentence.


    And a good haiku!

  3.  
    Sari Grandstaff
    2006-09-27 13:23:22
     

    Love this one - Peter Pan, who would never grow up, is now gray.

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-09-29 02:44:27
     

    rat race-
    amidst ragweeds
    tiniest yellow flower

  5.  
    Susan Constable
    2006-09-30 16:03:19
     

    Lovely, Dawn. The contrast of youth and age is shown so well.

    Susan

  6.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-10-02 08:40:14
     

    Haunting, Dawn.

  7.  
    laryalee
    2006-10-02 20:32:55
     

    I enjoyed this, Dawn!

  8.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-10-04 18:15:21
     

    brocaded carp--
    koi pond of many jewels
    reflects the starry sky

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