autumn rain -
a tattooed man sells
permanent markers


—Israel López Balan
        

About the author: I'm a mexican buddhist with a jewish name and mayan-spanish last names, who writes japanese haiku in english... What a cocktailized world!

Responses to the haiku for 17 October 2006 by Israel López Balan

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-10-17 05:32:58
     

    Brilliant, Israel.

    raindrops
    a bag lady nods
    to the beggar

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-10-17 08:47:29
     

    "tattooed" and then "permanent" (!) "markers"

    i like your haiku-idea very much!


    and i stare on these tattoos, see this rain and...

    a great combination!

  3.  
    Jordi Climent
    2006-10-17 08:52:39
     

    Israel, que sorpresa verte de nuevo por aquí.
    Un gran haiku. Enhorabuena!

  4.  
    kala ramesh
    2006-10-17 10:06:32
     

    Enjoyed reading and visualizing it!
    Thanks.

    -kala

  5.  
    judith ingram
    2006-10-17 11:04:27
     

    Great poem, Israel. And I love your multinational cocktailism!


    Judith

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-10-17 12:13:08
     

    Very original, and bags of layers to this haiku. I'll enjoy coming back, again and again.

  7.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-10-17 12:19:14
     

    sorry for my bad English...

    to stare at s.th.

    sometimes i forget the right words...

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-10-17 15:51:43
     

    angelika, don't fret; too often, many versed in english remember all the wrong words
    -

    autumn sunrise
    in the keys--
    it rains here, too

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