our walk in the field-
breaking the ice
on mud puddles

—Chris Hicks
        

About the author: Chris Hicks: monkeybrew at gmail dot com

Responses to the haiku for 6 November 2006 by Chris Hicks

  1.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2006-11-06 12:13:12
     

    i like your haiku, Chris!

    especially the double meaning of line two

  2.  
    Ajagbe
    2006-11-06 14:03:13
     

    Very nice.

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2006-11-06 17:16:30
     

    Nice pivot, Chris.

  4.  
    kala ramesh
    2006-11-07 00:50:30
     

    enjoyed your ku, Chris

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-09 05:25:51
     

    harvest moon--
    through billowing white clouds
    red-eye flight

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-11-09 09:36:46
     

    Excellent haiku, and I love "mud puddles"! Also, as stated above, good second line! ;-)

  7.  
    Terra Martin
    2006-12-31 13:36:46
     

    Wonderful! Mud puddles such a clean way to get dirty.

  8.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-12-01 19:17:53
     

    walk among the stars--
    night air
    bore her scent

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