thunderstorm-
inside the deserted temple
two stray dogs

—Vishnu P Kapoor
        

About the author: I am a retired Indian Air Force officer. Earlier I taught English Literature. I write poetry in Urdu language. I am a practising Buddhist. Being a widower at 65 years of age, I live with my married son and spinster daughter.

contact: vpk151042 at yahoo dot co dot in

Responses to the haiku for 20 November 2006 by Vishnu P Kapoor

  1.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2006-11-20 01:14:12
     

    tunderstorm--
    a spider's hidding
    from my eyes


    Your ku is well done... really beautiful!
    Thank you so much mr Visnhu.

  2.  
    kala ramesh
    2006-11-20 02:42:58
     

    thunderstorm:
    the leaves
    in my balcony

  3.  
    Magyar
    2006-11-20 07:18:59
     

    Vishnu,
    -Yours, a fine image; mine, a poor parallel from last winter's colder time.

    blizzard
    growling through the night
    my dog sleeps
    _M

  4.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-11-20 07:46:53
     

    Those stray dogs live beyond the haiku!

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-11-22 20:50:20
     

    lingering storm--
    cross my wall
    shadow dancer

  6.  
    Judy Giles
    2007-02-01 23:21:41
     

    These few words speak volumes. I am very appreciative of this gift of yours that you have thoughtfully shared.

  7.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-12-03 16:45:54
     

    autumn silence--
    last nights potluck dinner
    lingers

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