water seeping 
from a sunroom amaryllis
the storm outside


—paul m.
        

About the author: paul m. is an award winning haiku poet whose work has been widely published. He is Treasurer for the Haiku Society of America (hsa-haiku.org) and Haiku North America (haikunorthamerica.com), as well as book review editor for Modern Haiku (modernhaiku.org).

Contact: pauldmiller at fctvplus dot net

Responses to the haiku for 12 December 2006 by paul m.

  1.  
    Dave Russ0
    2006-12-12 09:54:46
     

    Nice balance of inside and outside, Paul ;-)

  2.  
    Sari Grandstaff
    2006-12-12 13:06:16
     

    I love this one! Really vivid.

    --Sari

  3.  
    Aurora Antonovic
    2006-12-12 13:13:58
     

    This is excellent, Paul.

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2006-12-13 04:01:16
     

    weeping willow
    by the dark waters--
    the storm rages on

    -

    to one in paradise, poe

    "thou wast all that to me, love,
        for which my soul did pine-
        a green isle in the sea, love,
        a fountain and a shrine,
        all wreathed with fairy fruits and flowers,
        and all the flowers were mine..."

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