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Responses to the haiku for 12 January 2007 by Jason Sanford Brown

1.  
   Vasile Moldovan (vasilemoldovan at yahoo dot com)
   2007-01-12 01:50:51
    

   all of a sudden
   a shoting star...
   indeed whose?!

2.  
   HarisH Suryanarayana
   2007-01-12 09:18:31
    

   Beautifully still !

3.  
   Jeffrey Winke (jeff_winke at yahoo dot com)
   2007-01-12 09:42:06
    

   Brilliant! Nicely written haiku.

4.  
   Francis Masat (cfmasat at earthlink dot net)
   2007-01-12 11:11:37
    

   this hot day
   everything still
   but me
   
   Key West

5.  
   Laura Orabone
   2007-01-12 13:44:03
    

   This is really lovely, Jason. One of my favorites.
   
   winter silence
   a star falls
   from the sky

6.  
   Bill Kenney
   2007-01-12 16:11:34
    

   starry night
   such a long way
   to spring

7.  
   b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2007-01-12 19:20:57
    

   starry walk
   'longside the pond
   quieter than usual--
   'cept basho's frog

8.  
   Judith Ingram (super dot ingram at verizon dot net)
   2007-01-12 20:59:57
    

   Dark the night
   beside the bay
   longing for
   the shooting star

9.  
   Jason
   2007-01-13 06:01:05
    

   Thanks to everyone for responding! Happy New Year,
   
   Jason

10.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-01-13 07:08:38
     

    this cold night
    nothing moves
    but stars
    
    (Jason Stanford Brown)
    
    
    
    
    
    "The Cold Night
    
    It is cold. The white moon
    is up among her scattered stars--
    
    ..."
    
    
    (William Carlos Williams)

11.  
    Anne Schmidt
    2007-01-13 19:38:21
     

    shooting star
    shining silver thread for
    Lady Night's kimono

12.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-01-13 23:43:06
     

    for a moment there
    thought stars were slipping-
    night airplane
    
    -kala

13.  
    Magyar
    2007-01-14 09:11:07
     

    a winter night's draft
    wrests the candle's flame
    stars fill my window
    
    _M

14.  
    Judith Ingram
    2007-01-15 21:40:04
     

    Anne, What a lovely kimona that might be.
    
    Judith

15.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-01-17 10:03:00
     

    Great haiku! I've known the feeling, especially under a vast Queensland nightsky!

16.  
    Precious
    2007-02-12 08:16:49
     

    Nice haiku very imaginative :)

17.  
    John
    2007-02-17 10:59:48
     

    winter night -
    only the stars
    to keep me warm

18.  
    toby evans
    2008-02-23 14:35:46
     

    "nothing moves
    but a falling star"
    
    "nothing moves
    but falling stars"
    
    as far as i can recall, unless i was
    under the influence of something that made everything move, the stars appeared stationary to the naked eye, unless of course one was falling.
    
    what passes for poetry today
    is a curious matter, especially
    to one who's come back from
    the dead.

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