winter morning -
our words turn into
white clouds

—Helga Härle
        

About the author: Helga Härle is a Swedish translator and creative writing teacher, enjoying haiku as a way of tracing the moment...and sharing it. Some of her English haiku have been published in the Heron's Nest, some of her Swedish have appeared in the Journal of the Swedish Haiku Society. Her home page is here.

Responses to the haiku for 22 January 2007 by Helga Härle

  1.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-01-22 06:31:02
     

    i enjoyed to read your haiku, Helga!

  2.  
    Ellen G. Olinger
    2007-01-22 07:39:32
     

    winter at last
    singing in church
    with snowflakes
    in my hair

    for Elin Borgh, born in Sweden

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-01-22 12:09:10
     

    I just loved those white clouds. As it's getting to be old fashioned proper British winter this week I'll remember these white clouds.

  4.  
    2007-01-22 14:36:17
     

    g'day Helga

    I loved this haiku. Felt the chill.

    Peace and Love

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-01-22 16:45:46
     

    oozing sap
    yellow-orange fat lighter
    fuels my flames--
    in drenching rain

  6.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-01-25 07:12:36
     

    I guess I'm the only one who finds "white clouds" too pretty here.

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