red coals . . .
    she persuades me
        to stay in bed



—Mike Farley
        

About the author: I live with my wife Shirlee on a cattle ranch near the little ski town of Red Lodge, Montana, and have been loving and writing haiku for several years now. I draw my inspiration from the images of the high-plains, mountains, weather, wildlife, livestock, ranch work and outdoor recreation which surround me daily.

Responses to the haiku for 23 January 2007 by Mike Farley

  1.  
    Mark Andrews
    2007-01-24 19:58:37
     

    Very nice.

  2.  
    Aurora
    2007-01-24 21:31:01
     

    I'm surprised this hasn't received more responses. It's a good one. :)

  3.  
    Corneliu Traian Atanasiu
    2007-01-25 00:32:27
     

    Ember of passion - nice and forcible illness.

  4.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-01-25 10:20:56
     

    I'd also like to see this in a haibun!
    But on the other hand it's already novelesque! ;-)

  5.  
    mike farley
    2007-01-25 10:34:20
     

    Thanks everyone for your thoughtful comments.
    And I'll give the haibun idea some thought Alan, but it's hard enough (for me at least) to write (hopefully) good three-liners - I don't know if I have the wherewithall to tackle an entire paragraph. Ha! Thanks again all, Mike

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-01-25 14:00:50
     

    her red nails
    between linen sheets
    scratch my back...
    her toenails as well

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