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Responses to the haiku for 30 January 2007 by Laryalee Fraser

1.  
   Alan Summers
   2007-01-30 04:19:18
    

   Ah, waist-deep snowdrifts, that was long ago in England, but I remember them as a schoolkid.
   
   Alphabet soup: I made a haiku out of them on my Myspace site! ;-)
   
   A really nice snow haiku, brrrrrrr!

2.  
   Magyar
   2007-01-30 06:46:31
    

   Laryalee,
   _Your's... a warming thought_!
   _Adrift in a kef, I long for spring. If winter comes, can spring be far behind?
   
   snowdrift fills
   the cabin's shattered bones
   a broken teacup
   _M

3.  
   Bill Kenney
   2007-01-30 08:22:17
    

   And spring spelled backwards is gnirps. If it were my soup, I'm afraid that's all I'd see. But you, lary, have the eye

4.  
   Aurora
   2007-01-30 08:55:13
    

   I want a bowl of spring! :) Nice one, Lary.

5.  
   Lynne
   2007-01-30 09:20:10
    

   Hi Lary - this is lucky and lovely. I'm going to see what my Alphabetti Spaghetti turns up! L x

6.  
   Bill Kenney
   2007-01-30 10:41:42
    

   With apologies, Magyar
   
   if winter comes
   can spring be far behind—
   well, far enough
   
   but I wrote this last winter.

7.  
   Adrian
   2007-01-30 11:59:31
    

   I wonder what spring tastes like.

8.  
   Angeliika Wienert
   2007-01-30 13:28:12
    

   oh, Adrian wrote what i thought!
   
   a nice haiku! thank you, Lary!

9.  
   kala ramesh
   2007-01-30 16:41:26
    

   a beauty again Laryalee!
   -kala

10.  
    Collin Barber
    2007-01-30 20:51:28
     

    Lary,
    
    I agree with Kala. I enjoyed seeing this one today. It's finally getting cold here.
    
    Bill, I remember reading that one on your blog. Enjoyed it again.
    
    
    Collin

11.  
    Magyar (magyar0109 at aol dot com)
    2007-01-31 06:34:32
     

    Bill,
    _I hope you don't feel I've -taken- your words; I assure you, my response above... was written as it was thought.
    _Respectfully,
    _M

12.  
    martin
    2007-01-31 19:08:50
     

    Lary,
    I like it; it's warm and nourishing...
    
    winter night
    the core of an apple
    full of seeds

13.  
    Norman Darlington
    2007-02-01 08:29:40
     

    Hey Lary, that was great! Today is Lá le Bhríd here (Brigid's Day), traditionally the start of spring, and at last I can feel the evenings drawing out a little. Your haiku is warm and lovely!

14.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-02-01 22:01:26
     

    norman, it's been awhile. the best in the new year.
    
    brigid's day
    
    sheep milk time is come
    the branch snows
    from stem of seedful sap
    comes raiding shooting light...
    
    ...against the blight 
    winter left in worms 
    for eating things...
    the green woodpecker laughs
    'ha ha hello'
    
    p. fiacc
    
    
    -
    
    over my head
    lustful red bougainvillaeas--
    yet, spring seems always near

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