a visit
two feathers left
on the sill

—Tanya Dikova
        

About the author: Tanya Dikova: bubalazy at hotmail dot com

Responses to the haiku for 31 January 2007 by Tanya Dikova

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-01-31 01:26:14
     

    Hi Tanya,

    Your poem says a lot in a quiet way!
    There is deep silence embedded in it.
    Great work!
    -kala

  2.  
    Aurora
    2007-01-31 06:54:21
     

    Nicely done. :)

  3.  
    judith ingram
    2007-01-31 08:32:19
     

    nice ku, Tanya


    in the unfinished house
    a scattering
    of red feathers

  4.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-01-31 11:38:30
     

    Simple, elegant, mysterious, my kind of haiku, thank you!

    falling down
    onto rush hour traffic
    seagull feathers


    Alan Summers

  5.  
    2007-01-31 12:06:57
     

    Beautiful.

    I had to stop and read the poem slowly. The first read "a visit" through me off. Anyway, I love the image.

  6.  
    Magyar
    2007-01-31 12:55:06
     

    Tanya,
    _A fine presentation!
    _A play of eight words... allowing the reader to describe the character.
    _M

  7.  
    Frances Ruth Harrris (harrisfr at yahoo dot com)
    2007-01-31 16:07:18
     

    Wow! I love it! Thank you for this
    wonderful image! It has been 25 below here
    near the Canadian boarder, and I feed our
    strong, yet all to fragile, feathered friends! Your sentiments are so dear!

  8.  
    Tanya
    2007-01-31 22:12:02
     

    Thank you all for your friendly and warm wellcome.

  9.  
    Norah
    2007-02-03 07:09:53
     

    I love It!
    Pure Art.
    No more words needed.

  10.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-02-04 22:39:29
     

    tanya, feathers are never what i find on my sill, balcony, nor patio; and yet visitors
    have left subtle reminders.

    -

    crap!!!
    where seeds, nuts, and suet
    earlier were

  11.  
    vineeth
    2007-07-23 02:19:53
     

    a smile
    a cat napping
    the lazy afternoon napping

  12.  
    Tanya (bubalazy at hotmail dot com)
    2007-07-25 12:35:44
     

    Yes,veeneth, this blissful smile is very familiar...I have a cat and I can see him very often smiling in his afternoon nap:)

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