fogged window
inside your hand print
the shadow of mine

—Carla Sari
        

About the author: Carla Sari (pen name) was born in Italy and migrated to Australia in 1967. She has been writing short prose and poetry for a number of years. Her haiku and tanka have been published in six countries.

Email: carlasari at hotmail dot com

Responses to the haiku for 14 February 2007 by Carla Sari

  1.  
    2007-02-14 03:54:11
     

    intriguing!

    greetings from foggy Denmark!

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-02-14 13:31:46
     

    Almost always a sucker for shadow haiku. A hand within a hand will always get me too.

  3.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-02-15 03:34:43
     

    Haiku about shadow are alwyas evocative.Enjoyed it.

  4.  
    Judi Hall
    2007-02-15 10:13:22
     

    Is it just a Canadian prairie thing that foggy windows and handprints immediately had me parked in lovers' lane ;-)?
    A great Valentine's haiku.

  5.  
    Magyar
    2007-02-15 13:04:01
     

    Carla,
    _So many tangents to explore; I hope your not offended... as I ramble away from the clear romance of your words.

    peering out
    rain streaks the glass
    cat attack
    _M

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-02-16 15:17:12
     

    judi, finding ourselves enarmoured, how many times has the "foggy window syndrome" resulted...
    or was it the call of the wild

    -


    pine fragrance
    beneath a blue moon--
    foggy windows

  7.  
    myron lysenko
    2007-02-18 20:09:02
     

    Hi Carla - how wonderful to see this evocative poem in my Inbox! i like it very much. it deserves to be shared with the world.


    it's heartening to see so many australian hakuists being represented internationally. goodonya, mate!

    best wishes,
    myron.

    PS I never knew Carla Sari was your pen name!

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