winter lake - 
only my eyes 
disturb the view

—Chaffinch
        

'Always come back out the way you went in (if this is convenient). The purpose being to ensure that the universe maintains its structure as this expresses itself in the individual.' Anon Domino

About the author: Chaffinch: sunbeam_city7 at hotmail dot com

Responses to the haiku for 15 February 2007 by Chaffinch

  1.  
    Gosia Zamorska
    2007-02-13 01:23:52
     

    I'm under great impression.
    This is the thing I've been trying to say all my life.

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-02-13 07:47:14
     

    A moment that goes on and on.

  3.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-02-15 00:23:31
     

    Truly striking ku!

  4.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-02-15 03:31:47
     

    A delightful haiku.Enjoyed.

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-02-15 06:57:27
     

    spinner, there's nothing new under the sun; newness is in that which is being seen by a person for the first time, though experienced many times previously by others.
    if we searched far enough, pass our first encounter, we shouldn't be surprised to see (it) having been done times before, even word for word.

    -

    no reflection, chaffinch

    -

    racing pass
    greying clouds...
    the snow moon

  6.  
    John
    2007-02-15 07:34:54
     

    spring lake -
    only my song
    disturbs the wind

    -chaffinch

    There seems to be an interesting sequence to my little haiku - I will follow this trail (the best haikus are absent of their author, even if in the first person?).

    NOTE: 'chaffinch' is an anonym of mine (of course:)

  7.  
    2007-02-15 09:08:04
     

    Wow! Great!

  8.  
    laryalee
    2007-02-15 22:49:53
     

    Oh, I really love this one!!!!

  9.  
    Collin Barber
    2007-02-16 10:51:25
     

    Dirk says it all for me. Nicely done.

    Collin

  10.  
    John
    2007-02-16 12:42:10
     

    summer lake -
    only my campfire
    disturbs the stars

    autumn lake
    only my memory
    disturbs the trees

    ..This could drive a person nuts!

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