red window candles this house has eyes

—Michael Paone
        

About the author: At 22, Michael is a young haijin who currently resides just outside of Boston, MA. A self-proclaimed urbanist, he dances quitely on the line between nature and structure. The resulting haiku keeps him somewhat sane.

Contact: mpaone12 at comcast dot net

Responses to the haiku for 20 February 2007 by Michael Paone

  1.  
    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-02-20 11:23:38
     

    Oooo, very nice! Thanks.

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-02-20 12:40:25
     

    that so vivid!
    i like your one-line-haiku!

  3.  
    electraglide
    2007-02-20 12:42:24
     

    アメリカ文か。

  4.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-02-20 12:48:28
     

    sorry for the typo!

    i meant

    that`s so vivid!
    i like your one-line-haiku!

  5.  
    Aurora
    2007-02-20 14:56:33
     

    I love this one.

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-02-20 17:38:38
     

    michael, i can appreciate your "about the author"; specially with it being said, "there's a thin line..."

    -

    'gainst a black sky white ibis draws the line

  7.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-02-20 19:09:38
     

    I ditto Angelika's vivid.

  8.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-02-21 02:17:49
     

    Hi Michael,

    Creativity, they say, is taking a fresh clean look at old knowledge-
    And you've done it!
    Great going!
    -kala

  9.  
    laryalee
    2007-02-22 14:40:19
     

    Enjoyed this...color and warmth,
    and a delightful image!

  10.  
    Elizabeth Hogg
    2007-02-23 09:38:33
     

    you made it!
    you're a star!
    my very own cripple :)

  11.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-02-24 07:00:59
     

    Very spooky, nice flow to the line. Would work well in a live reading or performance as well.

  12.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-11 06:42:04
     

    nightfall
    retracing my steps
    down shady lane

    -

    window candles
    this house has--
    eyes

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