holiday postcard...
a foot of snow
on the sundial


—Laryalee Fraser
        

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

Responses to the haiku for 26 February 2007 by Laryalee Fraser

  1.  
    myron
    2007-02-26 11:59:39
     

    i love the irony you have created in this wonderful haiku. congratulations Lary!

  2.  
    Aurora
    2007-02-26 12:35:14
     

    Excellent! :)

  3.  
    electraglide
    2007-02-26 14:11:10
     

    cool!

  4.  
    Susan Constable
    2007-02-26 14:53:42
     

    Kind of makes a vacation down south look inviting, Lary! A lovely ku, as always.

  5.  
    RaV
    2007-02-26 15:06:23
     

    A delicious irony, Lary.
    Great work.
    Warm greetings.

  6.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-02-26 16:46:39
     

    Hi Lary,

    Great imagery - clear and ringing!
    -kala

  7.  
    laryalee
    2007-02-26 16:47:55
     

    Thanks, Mryon...
    I'm glad "a foot" works okay...it's just not
    the same to say "30 centimeters"!

    Thanks, Aurora!

    Hi electraglide... not sure who you are,
    but I'm glad you like it!

    Susan, I should have dedicated this to my
    daughter...she scoots away for a holiday in
    Jamaica...the year before that, Mexico!

    Thanks, RaV...
    I've had about enough of winter now!

    ;-)
    Lary

  8.  
    electraglide
    2007-02-26 23:37:14
     

    joys of spring -
    in my footprints
    squashed snowdrops

    ..is a found commercial object (as opposed to a natural product:) a Šopyright issue? haiku paparazzo?

  9.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-02-27 00:38:50
     

    Beautiful haiku, Lary. Thanks for sharing.

  10.  
    Magyar
    2007-02-27 07:31:05
     

    Laryalee,
    _Don't we fold time's cloth too tightly, thereby getting caught in the creases we've made?
    _Here, your smallest increment of time is the season.
    -HOW GRAND-!
    _M

  11.  
    laryalee
    2007-02-27 20:14:41
     

    Ooops, missed you, Kala...we were here
    at the same time...thanks!

    Hi electraglide,
    I found your snowdrops -- not squashed --
    on your blog ;-) (interesting question, too...)

    Thanks, Rita!

    Magyar, I always enjoy your comments...
    good to see you!

    :-)
    Lary

  12.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-02-28 10:02:37
     

    I enjoyed the haiku very much, but makes me want to reveal this pun:

    "It's snowtime folks!"

    Sorry about that!

    I wonder if you have made this into a delightful haiga, maybe a future Christmas card as well?

  13.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-03-02 04:43:06
     

    key west morning-
    margaritaville
    weighs heavy on my mind

  14.  
    laryalee
    2007-03-02 19:47:28
     

    Hi Alan,
    thanks for the smile!
    No haiga...yet... ;)


    I enjoyed your haiku, Bob...
    (I hope it's not a headache!) ;)

    :-)
    Lary

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