sunrise...
the glint of light
on the coat hanger

—Aurora Antonovic
        

About the author: Aurora Antonovic is a Canadian writer, editor, and visual artist whose work has appeared over one thousand times in publications spanning eleven countries and five continents. She is a recent winner in the 2005 Tanka Splendor Awards, and a Pushcart Prize nominee. She is a member of The Bohemian Poet, a collective poet/artist group headed by Michael Ladanyi.

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 March 2007 by Aurora Antonovic

  1.  
    anthony slauson
    2007-03-01 07:24:04
     

    nice haiku, i enjoyed the subtle layers in this.

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-03-01 11:38:23
     

    I like this, and it also seems to carry a bit of noir mystery almost? ;-)

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-03-01 19:23:17
     

    Both sharp and suggestive. Well done, Aurora.

  4.  
    Bob
    2007-03-01 21:10:39
     

    Clever.

  5.  
    Jason
    2007-03-01 21:35:38
     

    Subtle. Nicely layered.

  6.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-03-02 10:48:37
     

    An evocative subtle haiku. Enjoyed it.

  7.  
    laryalee
    2007-03-02 19:40:58
     

    Aurora, I love this!
    So many possibilities...
    are you missing someone whose coat
    used to hang there...
    did you forget to pick up your coat from
    the cleaners so you now face a chilly day...
    or is it summer, and all your coats have been
    packed away...
    (and more, lol!)
    :-)
    Lary

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-03-03 18:58:30
     

    wintry darkness--
    avroy shlain "three eau"
    lingers
    on her pillow

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