kitchen floor
the nightlight reddens 
the mouse's ears


—Martin Gottlieb Cohen
        

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

 

Responses to the haiku for 8 March 2007 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    2007-03-08 09:35:44
     

    I like this one. Funny...but true. Good job Martin.

  2.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-03-08 10:58:53
     

    so delicate...

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-03-09 07:46:38
     

    I like this, full of domesticity: we have a mouse who appears now and again too!

  4.  
    Aurora
    2007-03-09 09:47:00
     

    Nicely done.:)

  5.  
    Craig McLanachan
    2007-03-09 13:14:18
     

    Congratulations, one of the best and very much in keeping with the haiku spirit.

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-03-10 18:31:14
     

    white popcorn kernel
    crossing the kitchen floor--
    el escarcho rojo

  7.  
    laryalee
    2007-03-10 19:31:26
     

    Martin, I burst out laughing...
    this is so darn cute!
    And I can see it clearly...those
    tiny ears...what a memorable image!
    :-)
    Lary

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